All Comments on 'A Desperate Conception Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Dumb

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This isn't fetish! Is stupidity!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, only one night and she is pregnant? It has to be at least a week or more of almost constant fucking that will make sure. One night with only 3 guys is not going to do. She will have to come back for more therapy sessions before she really gets pregnant. Oh, and throw in some other ethnic groups just to toss in some intrigue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wrong category. This isn't a fetish, it's non-consent. Dump the "no means yes" garbage there.

If it weren't for the non-consent I would suggest "group sex" as the closest match. There's also LW, but that category is a dumpster fire so I can't really recommend it for something which is an obvious fit elsewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I expected Adam to crash the car right at the end

mitchawamitchawa8 months ago

I agree with anonymous # 3. She may be pregnant but she may not. It may take several sessions to get her pregnant. The writing is okay, the plot is typical, but the sex scene is too short.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I loved it. The idea of her being taken to having a mind blowing experience. I took it for what it was. Thoroughly enjoyed

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