All Comments on 'A Devil of a Party'

it ended way to soon

Might have been a 5 but you promised too much and gave far too little.

what on earth do you mean by spastic tattoo?

since i'm leaving a comment, i will also say i thought the idea was rather good, but i do think you could ahve gone further with the gothic details; the spiders were great.

Liked the story, but its over to soon, so much more to offer, maybe add a couple more chapters?

Seems a shame to waste it.....

need more chapters this could be an awesome story if you add about the other members of party or Phil

Voted generously as I adored the decadence, and sweet, dripping debauchery, but have to agree with the others. So much depraved deliciousness, but over toooo sooooon, darling...

(Consider mine the vote of a greedy bitch who wants more and more!)

It was great writing but you left it lacking you should deffinately continue it.

Love your writing style.

The way you took your time in building up the swirling, growing debauchery - from concept to practice - was fantastic. And it's because it was all so beautifully set up that I would've like the party to play out and have something significant take place.

The whole story, all along, had felt like a journey towards... something. Phil was taking everyone - them and us - somewhere. Suddenly dropping it where you did left it feeling unfinished.

Still gave it five stars, though. One thing that cannot be disputed is your talent.

:)

AH

Sorry if you felt it ended too soon. I think so too. But, as my next paying manuscript is due soon, I needed to cut this one short and get it posted. I hope to continue with additional chapters for this after the manuscript is sent to the editor. Thanks for all the feedback!

I thought the build up, the masks and the book were fantastic. For some reason I hear "Hotel California" while reading it.

You NEED to finish this story!!!!!! Im hooked and super excited to see where it may go!!!! Sad at the ending was really expecting almost horror story! Gahhhhhh please finish it! when you do please email me mz_masters@cox.net my name is Heather!!!!!!!!!!

It's a good introduction but I expected pages more before the end.