All Comments on 'A Diamond in the Rough Ch. 02'

keep writing, I really love this theme-- and there are not many examples of it!

Dude(/dudette)...u totally rock!!!

Will love to read more of this series...

So kindly hurry up...:D

This story is incredible!! I want more!

Damn you are a great writer and had me hard as hell and dripping with pre-cum by the end and I don't even have a brother. I can't wait to read your future stories.

I pulsed out a lot of pre cum reading this, oh if I only had a brother or a man here to suck on and fuck, then also to be fucked in the ass. My step father did me when I was a teen, we sucked each other and fucked each other for a long time. I went into the service and I managed to find one boy friend wish I would have been able to stay with him but alas I got transferred. Now retired and looking for a man to also dress up for as I am a bisexual crossdresser too.

Would lobe to hear more keep it going

straight girls like us like to read gay stories from a bottom's POV.

I'm a straight girl and I love to here it from ALL p.o.v. I already know what its feels like to receive I want to know what the giver feels like... when you leave a comment speak for yourself and don't just assume you know what everyone else wants... food for thought!

Shire

I'm a straight girl too and I loved it....I wanted to be in that room watching both of you mmmmmm had me so wet!!!

Sexy...sensual...sublime...passionate...oh the pleasures of a wickedly wanton butt (_!_) !!!!!!

That was great! I fantasize daily about sucking my big brothers dick and having him inside me. Hoping that one day it might become a reality.

Yes, please write more about these two.. It's extremely exciting to read about this kind of forbidden pleasure and the anxiety it creates. Would be interesting to get 'little brother's" perspective and maybe a little rough play or dom/sub aspect. Great story - keep going.

Fuck that's hot

Someone once told me a good writer can cause a person "to see the leaves blowing" as they read. In other words, one can totally see the action which is taking place. I saw more than leaves, lol. Brilliant writing!