All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Father In Law'

by SEAWATER1

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LickerLoverLickerLoveralmost 10 years ago
Ok Story timing way off

So dear old Dad had Mandy (daughter) when he was 14

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Timing

LickerLover - it does happen you know

hoosier76hoosier76almost 10 years ago
I thought it was good

Hopefully you will continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I did not expect that ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Need an editor?

How did you start as Phoebe but end up as Sophie? Take your time and proofread

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

Terribly done

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I really enjoyed the plot, the story was fun... But....hmm...it just seems a bit off, almost like someone was telling a verbal story to a friend, but not really going into any great detail. Kind of like a dialog or something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
continue

I'd like to see you continue this and add Brad in as well.

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...