by SEAWATER1
So dear old Dad had Mandy (daughter) when he was 14
How did you start as Phoebe but end up as Sophie? Take your time and proofread
I really enjoyed the plot, the story was fun... But....hmm...it just seems a bit off, almost like someone was telling a verbal story to a friend, but not really going into any great detail. Kind of like a dialog or something.