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All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Father In Law'

by SEAWATER1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
continue

I'd like to see you continue this and add Brad in as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I really enjoyed the plot, the story was fun... But....hmm...it just seems a bit off, almost like someone was telling a verbal story to a friend, but not really going into any great detail. Kind of like a dialog or something.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

Terribly done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Need an editor?

How did you start as Phoebe but end up as Sophie? Take your time and proofread

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I did not expect that ending

hoosier76hoosier76almost 10 years ago
I thought it was good

Hopefully you will continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Timing

LickerLover - it does happen you know

LickerLoverLickerLoveralmost 10 years ago
Ok Story timing way off

So dear old Dad had Mandy (daughter) when he was 14

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...