All Comments on 'A Different Kind Of Revenge'

Thanks for sharing. Hope for chapter 2 soon if not already.

The cheating whore gave up her job and her lover. Jim should make his "other arrangements" to shove it up her ass. Will we ever know?

HA

this needs to die here CUCKOLD

Actually, I think this is a good place to end the story. We can use our own imaginations about how the marriage continued.

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But will you ever make a second chapter? It had a nice start and surprising story line. I am just wondering if they can actually make a come-back work...I do hope so because I have all ways loved happy endings.

Looking for part 2. I hope you don't let the smack from some of the comments below stop you from putting out the next installment.

HEY RC, ITS BEEN OVER A YEAR, WHAT HAPPENED TO PART 2. THIS MAY TURN OUT TO BE A GOOD STORY, PART 1 WAS AND LEAVES A LOT OF ROOM AND MANY TURNS TO THE END. TK U MLJ LV NV

Make up your mind.

Your protagonist, Jim, is so seriously pissed-off that he's willing to threaten the lives of not only only his wife's family, but that of her lover as well and then to lay down a set of conditions for cohabitation which are designed solely to punish her...only to then reconcile at the end after one day and a dinner?

Your story-telling needs a LOT of work, I think. If you can't design something that's plausible, there's a category that you can submit your work in - it's called "Sci-Fi & Fantasy". Anything outside that category should have some continuity to it, should be able to be consistent and follow from one step to the next and the next - a logical progression, if you will. Sadly, this one doesn't come close to conforming to that tenet.

If you want them back together at the end, that's your prerogative; you're the author, after all! But make the effort to give the people who read your work some basis for this to happen. From loathing to reconciliation takes work, no matter who you are...and writing about it takes every bit as much work, since you (as the author) are the one who has to come up with the reason(s) for this to work out the way you write it.

"...and they lived happily ever-after," only works in fairy tales. Discovering it was all a dream was a one-off that only the television show "Dallas" could have tried - and that was in the 80's!

So please, on behalf of every poor soul who's managed to suffer their way through this: put some effort into fleshing-out your stories. Give the folks you're allegedly writing for something to make your leaps of logic believable. Suspension of Disbelief is a requirement for fiction; work on it.

Wuss Ass Castrated Cuckold. You women writers really like castrating us guys in your stories!! LOL Another story that proves beyond a shadow of a dought that women are only life support systems for their pussies

WHILE YOUR STORIES AND SUBMISSIONS ARE ABOVE ADEQUATE, THE ENDINGS,ARE WITHOUT CLOSURE, AND LEAVING ROOM FOR UNRESOLVED ISSUES, LIKE IN 03, 05, AND 06 STORIES WHERE YOU STATED MORE TO FOLLOW, WE/SOME ARE STILL WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS OR EPILOGS. THANK YOU, MLJ LV NV P/S YOU DO HAVE TALENT AND I HOPE YOU DO CONTINUE AND WILL PUT SOME TYPE OF CLOSURE ON YOUR STORIES WHERE AND WHEN NEEDED.

where are you???? I cannnn;t see you.

This is Rob Conner, in his stories the wife could do the world biggest gangbang and he would find away to keep them together.........lol

That's it. In fact, it is so bad that RC can't stand to write Part two. Now that's bad.

This was an excellent lead in. It's almost 9 months old. Many of us are looking forward to Chapter 2 and possibly Chapter 3.

So where is the Follow-Up.

do they make it or does she get Stupid again and he Goes out with a Friend of Hers.

Increasingly LW authors are being more realistic about the treatment of "love" in their stories. In the past so many have the males protest how much they still "love" their mates even after being abused for a long time and to extremes. It's also refreshing to see your discussion of what "love" was and wasn't when the hubby confronted the wife. It makes the story much more believable and enjoyable than a sappy self-pitying male whimpering after the woman in the story.

Nice story . Its diffirent. Dont give up half way try to complete it would live to read the rest

Now for Hubbys Revenge. Cant wait to see who he go's out with First.

Someone she knows who has had it bad for her Guy would be the Best Shot at her Cheting Heart.

and if she was Younger and Prettier it would really mess with her Senses.

Cant wat for Chapter #2

We are awaiting Chapter 02. Good story so far. Clara seemed to give up extramarital sex easily. Maybe too easily. Looking forward to the next installment.

Nicely written story but wrong site to post a love story like that surely ?

It will be interesting to see how this all plays out.

You gave us such hope in the last paragraphs that they would work it all out. So did you set us all up for a different direction? Clara seems so sincere in making it work. But guilt will do that. How long will she last till it's back to the "it's different" routine. Or will it be with a few people getting "offed" before she really see's the light?

Thanks for writing!

I was loving it until I got to the bit where Jim said he wouldn't divorce her and if she tried to divorce him he would kill her family and Jed's family. The story fell apart from there. First of all, that's probably the dumbest thing any man can tell to any woman. She can still go to the police and have him arrested before he lifts a finger.

I suggest if you're going to write something, try to put down something plausible - something a little believable.

Unreal, I can't believe it myself.

Please have it about the wife doing all sorts of things trying to get in the husbands good books.

If it goes on to sharing, voyeurism (watching her with another guy), gang-bangs or the like, that would be a contradiction to the whole premise set out so far.

If it's about things she is willing to let him do to her, this will be a good story

It's a sign of your growth as a writer that you are exploring new ideas and a plot that takes a different turn. Anyone can write the same story over and over. Is it unrealistic? perhaps in some ways yes. And yes Harry, you're right; we see those same "meaningless platitudes" often but they're a staple of theses stories. We want to see the guilty party feel ashamed and stupid at what they have thrown away. And if the cheating didn't take place because sober thoughts gained control what would we have to read?

why is it in these LW stories the cheating whore wife ALWAYS after being caught or busted by the husband ... always thinks to her self... or says it to her girlfriends ... how much the husband was better looking or had a much bigger cock or was "twice the man you are!..."

but she never manages to think or say these words in all the months

she was whoring around?

This was a well written and enjoyed the way the husband handled himself and thought long and hard on what he would do. They have alot of scars and issues to work out but this was a nice story which a hopeful ending if they work together and communicate. Thanks for sharing.

Spends a long comment on another story... takes the cake for idocy!! This story was average and the over the top was not made up by the quck ending

Unfortunately, Rob, the story is really mediocre. I have read some of your other, earlier stories, and they were much much better, even from the start. And I say this whether the man faulters on his own self-promise, his own conviction, or not. The characters are just not that fascinated, endearing, or memorable. Perhaps they will become more so, once you've put more meat into their bones.... But I doubt it. Fortunately, it is nowhere as bad as the grave dicking story going on concurrently, where two grown, supposedly top notch lawyers are having a very tough time convincing a very stupid woman, at the DA's office as a lawyer herself no less --- one ten years in the past, and yet is still not over the whole fiasco, since it is only NOW that he showa his 10-year-on ex wife that that young girld he was seen with was his niece, not his lover, and if she the ex wife felt bad about it, NOW, being so wrong about him 10 years ago, AS HE IS now doing lawyering work on behalf of his ex-wife's current and to be ex-husband, a man she also accused of adultery, ALSO with flimsy and faulty evidence, again, of which NEITHER man can conclusively show to be faulty but are begging and threatening her at the same time, promising HER and her lawyer their photographic expert will give the two women evidence soon, showing there was no cheating going on (that it could have been a drugged-out set up but no adultery on the current husband's part, to which the wife said: "fuck you"!!! ---- yours is nowhere as bad as that gibberish story plotting and characterization.... But, again, I have my doubts about your own story...

No way a woman is going to admit she's wrong and magically completely change her behavior from selfish cuckolding shrew to perfect loving housewife. Nice as a fantasy but isn't going to happen.

There is no place in the US that the Jim's plan could work. Every state except New York permits no-fault divorce - meaning that Clara could get one whether Jim liked it or not.

New York does not have no-fault divorce, but one of the grounds upon which divorce can be granted is abandonment for a year or more.

Abandonment may be actual or constructive. Constructive abandonment occurs when one spouse refuses to engage in sexual relations with the other spouse for a period of one year. To prove constructive abandonment, the spouse attempting to obtain the divorce must also show that he or she made repeated requests for relations during that year, that the other spouse refused those requests and that the other spouse was physically and mentally capable of having sexual relations.

So - if Jim can get it up, and Clara makes herself available "repeatedly" - say once every few weeks for a few months, and Jim doesn't take advantage of the opportunity - he has "abandoned" her and she gets a divorce if she wants one.

The author's story line is as well thought out as one based on the sun rising in the west, or some other impossibility.

Been reading your stuff since 03'. Was wondering where your dissappeared. Glad to see you back.

...too quick on the rebound..

Not your typical story; but how long will her attitude last. After all, she dissed him for months and did things with her lover that she wouldn't do with her husband. Maybe sh'es changed, maybe not but I like his attitude. For better or worse, till death do us part....nice touch.

But I did enjoy the over the "topness" of his solution. However staying with the 'ho for whatever reason still makes him look pretty pathetic, and intimidating a women with the threat of violence (no matter how richly deserved) is total wimp out. He is fortunate that after announcing his intentions of punishment, she doesn't parry with the same threat, or worse yet go ahead and kill him (and his family) and take her chances with stopping his hired assassins.

Your stories are well written and well thought out. It is a pleasure to read your stories. So, welcome back.

This is another good story with the hint of a possible happy ending. Please ignore the clowns who are wondering where her money went. The story made it clear - she spent it and it's gone.

your not a writer.

Felt like I was reading a news article. There is little to no emotions in the story. If there was love, there would be palpable pain. People are not linear; they don’t go directly from point A to point B. They let the battle between logic and emotion rage. They may make the logical or the emotional decision but never without a struggle. Guilt and feelings of betrayal is fertile ground for depth for a story.

The writing was OK. Passable. The mistakes didn't get in my way. I agree with others the dialogue was a bit stilted and also agree the threat of auto killing everyone was over the top and unnecessary. He could have simply told her the marriage was broken, what he had done with their finances, how they would live, and let her stew in her mess to see what she would do... Although, a generic plot, done well and thus very enjoyable overall...

So much for reading a dirty story. Maybe you should see a therapist or get laid more often, Dick!

I have re-read your stories quite a few times now. So it's good to see something new from you. And yes a good start to a series. The wife actually sounds like she has some brains, not enough to stop her cheating but enough to know her husband means what he says. Anyway I am looking forward to the next chapter.

so where is the money?

But the details are more than a little unbelievable and the language quite stilted. Still I will read the next chapter to see if you come up with a nice twist....

Thought you were AWOL. Enjoyed the story so far. You are a good storyteller, if the writing isn't perfect so be it.

After reading the first comment on this story I went back and reread it. I guess I'm too dumb to notice all the mistakes that would keep people from enjoying the story. Then again, I'm not a literary teacher and read the stories here for enjoyment. Seriously I didn't find the huge mistakes that made the story hard to follow or that made it less enjoyable.

As far as the threat to innocent people, remember the husband said everything was set to automatic if anything happened to him. If he goes to jail the threat is carried out anyway so the wife should go running to the police. Not without a lot of serious thought.

I find the threat a little over the top and feel it was only written to explain why she would agree to his demands. A little dramatic but effective.

I usually don't comment on the plot of a story, characters or their actions in a story because they belong to the writer and will only do what they writer commands. I will say that the threat of violence was over the top and the drama could have been provided in a less extreme way.

But as I said earlier, I enjoyed the story and especially the ending. Good job and thanks for your hard work.

its been too long.

Haven't seen anything from you in some time. I almost always enjoy your stories.

Since you say there is more to come I am looking forward to it.

This should have been passed through the word processor another time or three, maybe handed to an editor. It was hard to follow in places, and generally was not believable.

I also didn't buy that she'd take the threat to kill her family without reporting it. Cheated-on or not, you don't threaten to kill innocent people.

This one rated 0 stars.