All Comments on 'A Different Perspective Ch. 04'

Seriously, I thought my heart was going to give out.

LOL. For some reason I found this statement really funny. :) Cute and funny. Awwww...I feel so bad for Keith for feeling unwanted and what's up with Travis anyway? Is he just fooling around or something? I mean, he didn't really say or do anything to prevent Keith from leaving or some kind of an explanation maybe? *sighed* I just don't know.

I'm totally digging this story though and I can't wait for the next installment. Great job! :)

Loved the awkwardness of the final paragraphs and that you changed perspectives gave the story another little shot of freshness which was great! I'm really enjoying the story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. =)

This is the most emotional part of he story so far. I feel bad for poor Keith but i hope it wors out.

Poor Keith. And poor Travis. I know Eric meant well, but sometimes friends should just shut up and back out.

felt the awkwardness and angst, know what its like to be on the rebound and yes it hurts, I felt keith's hurt, well written

Dude can’t even be open and honest in his own relationship but wants to butt into what Keith and Travis are doing together smh are they not grown men? Where was his need to butt in back when Travis was giving Keith the cold shoulder?