All Comments on 'A Different Proposition - 750 Words'

This is funny in a very dysfunctional way, but atleast the dude is going into this with his eyes wide open. So if he or she ever fucks up, well he knows like Barbie SHE WANTS IT ALL!!!!!!!

To Amy: Yes. This is a short scene from one of my little-read "Lifestyle..." chapters adapted for the 750-Word Project. It's sort of a caricature of the relationship of my two main characters: strong-willed woman and the geek she wants. Maybe I should have posted it to "Humor and Satire".

Cute story. Well done!

Wow. Well written but man they are in for hard times At least she is honest and put it all out there.

I don’t think being manipulative and abusive has anything to do with being empowered. More like… immature. I wouldn’t have married her.

Really stupid. I’d been out the fucking door so fast.

DTB

Cute and rather humorous story with a title that tells the tale. It’s well written but definitely different, with enough red flags to equip the traffic police! Nice job!

At least she is honest so the guy knows what he is getting into! Well written.

What a twat. Nice read. 👍

I liked it. Short, sweet and to the point! And I had to laugh at parts of it.

Got a "chuckle at eh end!

got a good chuckle at the ent. Worth the read!

A beginning to quick end.

Maybe not if she keeps playing him. Cheat away.

Not happening

Went out with a ______ (you fill in the blank) like her. Got serious, then the shit started. Walked away. Actually, RAN away. Never looked back.

This guy is in for a lifetime of hurt. Laughed during the story.

Cheating is coming and she will hopefully not use too big a dildo while routinely sticking it up your ass

Never knew romance meant cuckolding. Any how....

Waiting for the strap on to come in play. Pussy ain't that good to lose total control. Guy should ghost that one.

I would have cut her loose right then.

Bitch with a bad attitude.

Dude… run. Run fast…run far. Run.

Amusing story - enjoyed the give and take