All Comments on 'A Dirty but Wonderful Little Secret'

A little fast, a little short, but hey, that just means you can make this story better.

Cute story. Good dialogue in the beginning. Could have used more of the juicy details.

Love this. Excellent work

Hope this takes on another chapter or two, bringing Merle into the equation.

Really needed some description of the orgasms and climaxes. Story felt totally incomplete and emotionless without the descriptions, or even an attempt at including them.

Loved it! Brilliant! 5 - Stars!

It's not the same at "Past the point of no return"?

NOTE: The story above is a rewrite of Past The Point of No Return, which Lit returned because a couple sentences over-stepped the boundary of Lit rules. I took those sentences out, plus did some re-writing and then re-submitted under a different title: A Dirty But Wonderful Little Secret.