All Comments on 'A Dirty Secret Ch. 02'

by PETERWIMSEY

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Perfection

Lmao good stuff m8. Can't wait to see what's next

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your or you're

Please learn the difference.

Your mother not you're mother.

Check your grammar not your grandma.

PETERWIMSEYPETERWIMSEYover 4 years agoAuthor
YOUR/YOU'RE

i did s quick spell check. Those two words came up 16 times. two mistakes - no ones perfect, talk about being a pedant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really good job.

Great story and well told to date. There is obviously more to come. Story 1 was pretty flawless with few, if any, spelling or grammatical errors. Story 2, however, had many. I urge you to carefully edit your stories. The errors detract from an otherwise accomplished standard.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 3 years ago
Sweet

Great work. Yes a couple mistakes but great work. Would really like to see more of this series

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