by PETERWIMSEY
Please learn the difference.
Your mother not you're mother.
Check your grammar not your grandma.
i did s quick spell check. Those two words came up 16 times. two mistakes - no ones perfect, talk about being a pedant.
Great story and well told to date. There is obviously more to come. Story 1 was pretty flawless with few, if any, spelling or grammatical errors. Story 2, however, had many. I urge you to carefully edit your stories. The errors detract from an otherwise accomplished standard.
Great work. Yes a couple mistakes but great work. Would really like to see more of this series