All Comments on 'A Dish Best Served Cold'

See, Lawyers are good for something...

Sexy story, I don't agree with the drugs but well done

the story is too good to leave there i hope you continue with it

it was pretty good. Why did you write that in writer - it just sickened and distracted strongly from a good effort??

It wasn't good / it broke the flow / it detracted from what followed as it might occur again / most of all it wasn't erotic or sensual was it.

You can do better in that regard.

It started off good but the ending was poor. it was very abrupt and seemed hurried. You also didnt show how he let her know what he did finally to make the revenge fully come together. Plus how did this drug turn her into a horny cock slut out of no where? the story has holes. LOL

eating shit and drinking piss is rude u could have done so much better than that and i really want 2 b a lawyer and im always gonna b 1 i just hope the wrong person dont read this 1 might get ideas and if they do the story leads back 2 u just saying and its fukked up the way u did this story i would kick sum1's ass if i knew they were doing shit like this

Good character development... very thoughtful revenge method,