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prodoverprodoverover 20 years ago
EXTREMLY HOT

great story you had me hot from the start and got hotter as i read each line .i put myself in the story and all the lust came to an explosive finish. thanks i needed that

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

the ending was too abrupt. It was a good story, a good turn on. but needs more. write a sequel or something.

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