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Anonymousabout 12 years ago

Very well done

About the firsr story I've read in Literotica that has no horrible misspellings and no grasp of syntax—or indeed of the English language.This alone made me enjoy your story and that, and the good clear writing about the domination of Susan were terrific. I'd like to read more about her kinkiness, and more about your inflicting pain on her.

Gwen in Los Gatos

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