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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
nice

love this i hope there is a part two where he breeds with her and makes her his mate and lover and mother of his young

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I agree with the other anon. I hope there’s a part two of her getting bred fat with dragonet kits.

AshLJAshLJover 3 years agoAuthor
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I am currently working on a part 2.

Sam_WolfSam_Wolfalmost 3 years ago

The story kept me engaged. As a fellow writer, I found that the grammatical mistakes retracted from the story. If you went through and edited, it would make a good story great.

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