All Comments on 'A Dragon's Tale Ch. 33'

AWESOMEEEEE. One of the great stories i have read here. Great twist at the end though lightly antcipated one. But it is good. I really wanted to know how Ethan deals with Lord Borden.

Request : If u can, Can you also pls post the pictures of the weapons he is using, used, going to use and him in the armor ?

Another month, another 5 star review.

My favorite story here.

Love this world!!!

This is going very well. I enjoyed this chapter and it felt complete with a natural brake. Please write more.

Wow, another great addition to this story. Thank you!

Yes!!! This is by far my favorite story going right now and waiting for the next chapter is torture. 😂. Fantastic writing. Thank you.

Came for the sex, stayed for the story. Can't wait for more.

And the cliffhangers are beginning to come back (which is nice). I love this series and am excited that the next chapter is coming earlier than usual.

By the way, what happened to Selene's gun?

One of the best chapters. Delighted you didn't drag out the demon in Sarah thing any longer 👍🏻

Another very good chapter. Looking forward to the next one

Great chapter, some really good plot development here. And the cliff-hanger at the end was perfectly pulled off.

First glance at the beast shown, good comparison, the sheer amount of pages is great to get into each upload.

I was both happy and sad reading this chapter. Happy because it appears that Ethan has a long way to go before he's powerful enough to defeat the Black Dragon (which means plenty more story to go, yay!), happy because the story is still gaining new branches (Orcs and Demons now!), but sad because this is the final chapter currently posted, and I'll have to wait for the rest. :D

I wanted to quickly point out that some descriptions seem to be literally copy/paste from earlier parts of the story. For example, the description of the Blacksmith's shop when Kendra walks in is word-for-word what the first description was back when Ethan went there. Different characters should have different viewpoints, IMO.

Lastly, I wanted to say thank you so much for your time and effort in writing and posting this awesome story for us Literotica users to be able to read for free! I can't thank you enough. It's been really enjoyable and I am looking forward to the continuation!

I love how your style evolved; the first chapters were fast paced and I loved them, then around 15-25 the story slowed down a lot with many repetitions of the same events told by different people, and a lot of praising and love declarations that amounted to not much. But the last few chapters strike a really nice balance that I really enjoy, and the erotica is both sexy and heart warming. Props to you, I am eager for the next chapters.

An absolute highlight. I love the current pairs so much; Selene Sarah, Kendra Taloni, Alana Rachel, it leaves Beth a bit out of focus at the moment, but the trip to her father's is about to put the spotlight on her

Antiproton; Great story thank you. Just question. When Lady Ekthros threatened to have Telani knocked up by another dragon. I'm surprised the dragon side of Ethan didn't try and knock up all his wives to prevent something like that from happening. Not even a battle of will between the dragon and Ethan. Is there a reason this fell to materialize?

Beth: I know we are about to get another story arch revolving around her. When she was first introduced, she was very book smart. But we rarely see this side of Beth. You gave her an ability which is nice. But Ethan uses Rachel far more than Beth for knowledge. Would like to see Beth have more role.

intens love story' 5star . please continue

Several typos and outright missing words slipped through the editing. The story is still intriguing but editing is still lacking.

Really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for writing!

Wanted to thank you for such a wonderful adventure. I to am dyslexic and readers do not understand just how hard it is to write and not have errors, but worse yet, editing your own work, you never see errors. Spelling mistakes, missed. Also words missing you just do not see them, you mind tends to fix what you read, and moves right on. So keep in mind when your feel the need to piss and moan about what you see as simple errors dyslexic don't see them! No really we dont!!

Well, Antiproton ole buddy, your new editor did a fair good cleaning up after you, ... but, ... there were still dropped words, words with extra letters, word missing a suffix such as an 'ed' (so, a few tense problems), yet it was still a tad bit better than your own dialectic efforts ... I Loved Sarah and her 'problem', and I Loved that Ethan also fell in Love with Sarah, ... such a sweet, demon possessed, girl. And she can really cook too! As well as punch through extra tuff Armor, ... Enjoyed it, ... and it seems the story's pace is picking up a bit too, ... ;-) TTFN

I had this saved in my internet bookmarks so I could check back in case you added more chapters, today it almost feels like Christmas! Cold and rainy here so I'm curled up with you, hot chocolate, and a fuzzy blanket and this hits all the right spots... Thank you!

Excellent!

Sarah is sweet but the awkward, uncomfortable, nervous, boring sex scene (BJ) at the start leaves a sour taste, not to mention Ethan being even more of a little bitch than normal.

True to form Rachel is too inhibited to be naked around her sister wives initially.... It's another of the author's ways of stringing people along with more drawn-out boring cock-teasing. People being stubbornly in denial is still easily, by far, his favourite stalling tactic though. Reading it multiple times every chapter when there's no suspense (we know they'll get together, possibly after a deus ex machina plot device is employed if required) is so exciting and not at all annoying though right?

Wait, what?

It amazes me how many people are obsessed about spelling, grammer, typos, etc. As long as the intent of the story comes across why does it matter? It seems rather OCD. It's amazing the volume (even taking into account the repetitiveness) this author pumps out considering his dyslexia.

An author watching you grow as an author while reading the story has been amazing you've grown a lot the emotional depth to the characters is beautiful thank you thank you so much for the privilege of reading this novel

I like the story, it’s coming out well and things are falling into place I think the only thing I’ve noticed that’s somewhat not sitting well with me is how Ethan is easy pushed or if I might say it like this how his wives push him into liking someone or another wife it actually seems move of his being pushed and they don’t consider what he wants… the pushing is just too much for me

Wonderful Story but only one downside is "Main character Is whipped by almost everybody, I mean Don't make him so weak ( puts me off) everytime atleast give him the power to defend properly He's a Fucking Dragon 🐉+ Prophet ...Even a Girl takes him to the brink of death ( So Helpless) Try to make him stronger I love the story but his Welp nature is getting me everytime .

Protagonist goes to the inn fearing agents of his enemy, yet believes on faith the story of a total stranger needing his help, in that very inn? Little wonder he was easily bilked of his business by his wife!

Where was the Peg Leg man when the beating commenced.?