All Comments on 'A Dream...'

Very erotic submission. Was not sure I would get absorbed, but it grew on me and drew me in. Got me very hot. He obviously needs her and vice versa. Wondering is she will get hers, in the end. Need more to see where this goes. I think this belongs in either fetish or erotic coupling, probably not Romance. Nice work. Submit more!!

Not generally my cup of tea, but it drew me in. I am not sure who is crazier, him or her, but they obviously have a very erotic connection. Very high on the arousal and tease index. I definitely want more next time. Please write another soon!

HOT Story. Very erotic lass. But she wouldn't stand 2 minutes against me.

super hot!

Loved it!!! But watch the spelling.

Glad you all liked it. Thinking of writing another. Let me know if I am on the right track.