All Comments on 'A Dream Cum True'

Pretty good for a first try. You write pretty well and though the plot is standard fare, I enjoyed the story of two friends realizing a mutual crush. Keep writing !

Good start. I had a logistical problem with one part: They're in the home of her parents, in the middle of the night, and yet she's screaming as she cums. Are they deaf or oblivious?

How is she able to do that much screaming if mum's home? Okay for a first story but that detail really bugs me personally

it was a good read need a part two and more

It is VERY GOOD,FOR, A NEW WRITER WRITTING FIRST STORY. !! I LOVE CUNNILINGUS, SI RICK LICKING SOPHIE'S PUSSY MADE ALL THE DIFFERENCE FOR ME FROM GIVING YOU FOUR ( 4 ) INSTRED OF FIVE ( 5 ) !!