All Comments on 'A Familiar Intern'

by CaitExists

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hate. hate. HATE second person stories. 1st person or third person omniscient would still have been from your friend's POV.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

WOW! ...hot, well done for you first story...sure got me going! ...some errors ...but easily cleaned up. Hope you will continue..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

excellent - especially for a first story. Keep writing and keep that imagination going

Moon_95Moon_958 days ago

Very hot! You're a talented writer, hope to see more from you!

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