All Comments on 'A Family Affair'

The story only just got started with only half a page.

I hope the next part gets a lot further into the story

A woman in tuned with her taboo desires is so erotic. Sometimes it takes that unexpected A-Ha Moment to become overwhelmed enough to seek a solution.

Extremely well written in content and mechanics.

I liked it, too bad you didn't finish it. Maybe Jay noticed he'd forgot his phone and came back to retrieve it ........

I'll give this a 3 for now. We'll see about later.

MORE PLEASE!

This was a good start to could be a really good series. By itself it is quite lacking... Please continue.

How is STEP mom/son stuff even in the incest/taboo section??

best have sequel that pretends she never did read text . best have sequel that pretends she never did

watch video . best have sequel that she now begins tease him relentlessly - until he makes more phone videos

{ absolutely unaware she can access them } . also best have sequel her getting the phone from him

over again [ along watching along reading newer stuff ] . most importantly best have sequel tons longer this -

that'll absolutely setup things them fucking third installment : that'll also tons longer than this along sequel

. another most importantly thing best happen from sequel ( everything best become hush remain secret

from husband\from father )

Hi anonymous, I plan on continuing much further with the story! This is my first ever publication so it was more of a practice run to see how submissions worked. Next part will be much longer! Glad you enjoyed it.

"The story only just got started with only half a page."

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What did you expect from a story with such a cliched and trite title?

Good story. Good start

Good start! This could get hot and heavy fast.

Give sexy Jay a splash of sexy chest hair for that gorgeous muscular man chest!

I hope this story continues.

Great start I hope you continue

Keep writing!

It's refreshing to see a write/Author not fall into the bad habits of some writers/Authors bad use of Literacy, here at Literotica! One of the worst is the misuse of the ... for a pause and the other is the over use of mmmmm. We speak English and we can use or imagination! I also hate mumbling, bumbling and stumbling in speech. I quit reading if the main character cannot speak proper English. You first story was well written and enjoyable! If I follow, later will I be disappointed? 5 BIG FAT STARS!

Kinda short? I was hoping for her to sneak in his room and blow him.