All Comments on 'A Family Affair Ch. 02'

Wow! This has to be about the hotest story I have read on this site. Great fantasy well developed and very well written. The conversation between characters and timing is spot on. Hopefully with 6 young ladies and 3 MILF's you can keep the series going for awhile. This is one I am going to hate seeing end.

Be safe be healthy enjoy life and keep writing! Please!!!

Cheers

SAGE

Wow indeed. This young man must be in sexual heaven. The possibilities are endless for this story. I wonder how many of the ladies will want to have his babies? Eager for more please Sir.

A great continuation. I love they way tis story is developing. The characters are totally believable if a little strange by society's standards. I can't wait to read more.

SO GOOD! Love it, now I want Mark to fuck his mom... Too bad there's no grandma around too.

Getting better and better as the viewpoints change. Thank you

I hope you will keep writing this excellent story. Thank you.

Great series!!!

Sad circumstances that all 3 women lost their husbands, At least they had the money to provide for a wonderful lifestyle..

Please keep this storyline going.

We have 4 young beauties that need to be "serviced" and a willing cock and maybe a trio of MOTHERS.

Good shit, I love that there's a strong element of romance in this too. I'm interested to see if that stays with only certain characters, or if each woman he sleeps with share a degree of romantic feelings with him. Either way, I'm keen for what's next and to see where this goes

I liked the story a lot, just got a bit confused at times with, what I felt, we're gender mix ups with his and hers being used at the wrong times, or in the wrong places, but apart from that I liked it. Shame me and my 5 sisters never got the same action.

That boy better make sure he takes his vitamins with the way these women are lining up to fuck him. Like the story and feel very jealous lol. Looking forward to the next chapters

Well balanced story of love, lust, and relationships. I can see where you are going as he will likely fuck every woman in the house by the end of it, with Heidi being his long term love. Only problem I have is you can't have that type of loving sexual relationship without jealousy coming out, as well as guilt on his part as he starts to "prefer" one or two above the others. we'll see where you lead us, but 5* for now.

Just get to know from comments that this is sequel of memoirs.

But where is memoirs? loved that series,seraching for years. You delete that story?

God!!! bring back Memories.

Absolutely love this story and part one as well. I am begging you to continue because it is so hot.

I missed your writings 'universe' while you were gone; so, welcome back... Where you take this particular series I've no suggestions because, again, it's your universe... would I like to read of a bit of strife or inner conflict between the hero, outside influences and the family members; nothing that would destroy the family dynamic, but just a ??? Again, it's your 'universe' to create and story to tell, so, again welcome back... I look forward to the next instalment

A hot, sexy, and mostly well written part two. Good connections between the characters. Some minor grammatical errors, but otherwise very enjoyable. Looking forward to the next chapters.

haha so I'm not the only one looking for Memoirs. reading so many comments about it. You gonna upload?

I would love more chapters of an old mans fantasy!

I always want the best stories I read to come to a conclusive ending after all the parts are played out. You have a potential, at least, of 10 parts to finish. I would have liked them to be done already but I hope you can come up with a few parts soon.

Loved it! I wish a woman would have had the patience and taken the time to to teach me instead of learning by trial and error.

Yeah, it’s hot, obviously but it all happened just too easily. The cousin was the easiest to understand but the sister and the mum not so easily. Mum should also warn them not to hurt him important that

Well, this story is going to be interesting. I can just see all of the cousins, sisters and maybe even aunty and mom getting in line to fuck Marks brains out. 5/5

I can only imagine the hell he’s going through.

Top story your writing continues to impress. Glad you can let the family get down to business without hangups & moralising. Think I’ll binge out this weekend. Cheers

More...more...MORE!!! This series is not just about sex, it is about the emotional and loving attachments the members of this family OBVIOUSLY HAVE for each other...moms, daughters, cousins, nieces, nephew and son!!!

Mom said it best...they have to keep the equilibrium in the family, and relationships, or SHE will put an end to it all!! Well stated, and right up front put s the parameters in place so all the ladies understand!!

Five**5**Stars...A whole constellation of them...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌀🌀🌀🌀🌀

I dont think I"ll continue reading this story. It'll end up with Mark fucking 9 women which would be very un-incest like.

Parts one and two are a roaring success. Perfectly descriptive in all aspects. Most of all, it's erotic, sexy, and sensual at the same time. Easy to visualize. On to Chapter 3!

My God,I’m glad I’m not in his shoes.I’ll be like a dog and a butcher shop I wouldn’t know which one to go too first AND it would just be my luck to die of a fucking heart attack fucking nine women in the house. I would need the strength of Hercules and a pharmacy full of Viagra to keep going. 😂😂😂…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Damn why couldn't I have a family like this growing up??

It was pretty good but was kinda disappointed his sisters weren't virgins too, so I'll stop here.2/5

Yes, I know it's all fantasy, I just think all this nudity and being OK with him having sex with everyone happened a little too fast. 7.5/10

The phrase "coming to fruition"...I have used that on more than a few occasions, and the usual comment is "Who even talks like that??!!". Well, I do, and I am most happy to see our author does also!!

Now that the whole family thing is out in the open...Heidi is the most exciting and understanding thing on the planet!! That she is willing to share Steve with the others shows a maturity beyond many young ladies understanding and patience. Plus, she KNOWS that he is coming back to her ALL the time...they are now BOUND by their mutual love, the kind of love that transcends time!!

Amy...oooo, she wants his 🐥 baby...SSSOOO erotic and nasty...this will be an interesting future!!

The rest of them...all will be told in the next few chapters. That Carolyn read the riot act to EVERYONE about the relationship(s), and not letting jealousy get in the way was also heartwarming, and very kindly done, considering...

Amy's crying...very sweet, I see more happy tears being shed, maybe even by Steve!!

Mom's are next(!!??). Yyyaaayyy!!!

Five Stars..

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