All Comments on 'A Family Marooned'

This is an interesting story. It could be very exciting if you could continue with a bit more details on how the new family got embarassed the first time they saw the open sexual relationship of the family that first came in the island. Then more details of their swinging or orgy.

Maybe in Months to come, few more families will be damped in the island and they will have a community that everyone can have sex openly anytime and anywhere in the island in the presence of everyone passing by.

In the five words you wrote, you had two spelling errors. Maybe you should worry about your own writing skills.

Thanks.

This has the potential for being a great story or even a series but it could use a little fleshing out. I've read several of your excellent stories now so I know you've got it in you.

As far as stories go, this is like a readers digest version, you get the basics but very little details. It has the potential to be a quite good series, if fleshed out (pun intended).