All Comments on 'A Father's Fantasy - 01'
by vegitto306
- 16 Comments
Anonymous4 months agoDear Lord! That was hawt!!! But just a couple of thoughts about the story. What happened to the boy she was sucking off when her Dad barged in her room? I must've missed something there. Also, what about Becki's hot best friends? Shouldn't he get to enjoy their pussies too? Would be hot to continue the story with a threesome or foursome in the pool or hot tub. Just my thoughts. But excellent story... please continue it!
Anonymous4 months agoGreat story, it made me really crazy. The characters are good designed and the plot can evolve in every direction. I really want to have more.
But small logic errors bothered me. I love the fact she is pierced but the moment of realization of the father is illogic because he should have so much high resolution footage of her while showering that he had to notices it earlier.
But I‘ll definitely follow you for more content ❤️
Anonymous4 months ago5 Stars. Loved that Daddy came on Becki's face. So fucking HOT!!! Hope you'll write a follow up with Becki dressed up in sexy hot lingerie. A sheer bra, satin garter belt, sheer stockings and frilly ankle sox with heels that she keeps on while taking daddy's cock.
The dirty talk was excellent. Could even have more.
Well, written with just the right amount of lead in to the spectacular fucking.
Anonymous4 months agoI must say it a 10star story level of seductness, big boobs ferish and ofciuse the daddy daughter duo
Anonymous4 months agoI would have ended it with Gabbie in the doorway, hand down her pants, lust in her eyes saying, “My turn, daddy.”
vegitto3064 months agoAuthorThank you for the feedback. I've got some good ideas for coming chapters but would love to hear of some 'fatherly fantasies' that the readers would like to see Becki fulfil in the coming chapters.
Anonymous4 months ago@vegitto306 here some ideas:
- Becki could become a wive substitute in every possible way, like sharing the marriage bed
- Becki should either include or induce her friends to have fun with her dad
- she could be his whore to lend to her dad friends
- prepare her for anal sex
I hope to give you some ideas, maybe they are a too extreme and don´t fit in your story complex
Anonymous4 months agoGreat story. Daddy needs to take his little girl up to her bedroom, while the house is empty, and turn the camera on. Film their fuck session and then the clean-up in the shower. Gabbie finds the videos and wants in, which Daddy and Becky are happy to oblige. Two more cameras, in Daddy's bedroom and Gabbie's. Lots of Great possibilities.
Anonymous4 months agoI accidentally heard my daughter having sex with her boyfriend Ben one night and started to get ideas,id try and watch them from the stairs but it wasn't enough for me,I looked into buying spy cameras and after a lot of research I bought the camera's and installed them in her bedroom,I wasn't to be disappointed,I saw her sucking Ben's cock and them fucking but the best was to come,me and Sophia's mother went on holiday and left her at home for the first time,half way through our holiday we were in bed and my wife had fallen asleep,I had a notification from my phone and the cameras started filming back home in Sophia's bedroom,she was having a party and our house was full of teenagers,4 boys walked into her bedroom and Ben was one of them,Sophia came in a short while later in just her underwear,I got up from our bed and went into the main room,Sophia starts kissing the boys and they started getting undressed,Sophia sat on her bed and started sucking the 4 boys off, they were all hard and then she got on the bed and took her knickers off,the boys stood behind her and all had their turn fucking her,what came next was incredible,Sophia was getting dp'ed by two of them before the next two had their turn
Htsl4 months agoA great 5-star story and I hope for several following parts. But I had to subtract one star for the large cock. Why do all men must have giant cocks? That is more than unrealistic!
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