All Comments on 'A Favor for Alicia Ch. 1'

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 18 years ago
Great hot erotic fantasy!

Great work!

don87654don87654about 17 years ago
Very normal and erotic animal behavior

Can we please have more of this one? Do you get pregnant right away or does it take some time?

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesabout 16 years ago
a perfect length

Nooooo..please don't write a sequel. Leave it to our imaginings. So often I get asked to write a follow-up to something I wrote as a short story. I want you to do what I do please and leave your readers imagining their own endings...For me, I see her staying with them, maybe getting a threesome going, the sister suddenly getting pregnant too (so often that happens when the heat is taken off), both fucking while pregnant which can be amazing, etc etc.....Bottom line? Loved the story just as it is.

P.G.

jott50jott50over 9 years ago

AWWWWW that was sweet

onepussyhound2onepussyhound2over 8 years ago
And now -

She cums for both of them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

And why was this an editor’s choice? Sister and brother-in-law takes advantage of younger sister. Nothing remotely erotic about this

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

finger-banged virgin? Does this author even know the hymen exists?

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