All Comments on 'A Favour Ch. 04'

What a mess. They should have told Matt to go take a walk for about half an hour or so and then gone ahead with their sex. Having him watch and participate made it extra complicated and really badly dealt with.

Story going great then you had to go add another person, way to throw off the whole dynamics. Thanks for nothing.

Having been caught by Matt there were only two ways it COULD go - either he joins them or runs screaming for the hills (as David thought Josh had after their first night together) telling all their mates about what he'd seen. As a one-off it gave the guys another 'boundary' to cross and let's be honest now he's joined in Matt's going to find it difficult to blab so their secret's still safe for them to CARRY ON - PLEASE!!

Not a fan of Matt joining, but I hope you continue with story as it’s been pretty incredible.

The dynamic may have changed but it also ramped up the totally horniness. Keep it going

Oh my this was a great tale! Many favorite lines, in this chapter it was: "Taking charge, he reached around and grabbed onto Matt's petite dick, directing him finally to his waiting hole." So good dear Author. So good.

WoW, go Josh 10/10 awesome chapter.

Excellent story! Kept my attention the whole time!

there needs to be more!!

I loved the first three chapters, but this one went too far off the plot. Still well written.