All Comments on 'A Feel For The Ice Ch. 02'

I was so happy to see the next chapter up so soon but ugh. I *need* the rest of that scene! I hope you pick up with it soon!

I know this is only part 2, BUT, it seems to me there are at least 8 - 10 paragraphs missing! You should stop doing that to us old guys. O well, patience is a virtue seldom found in women, and almost never found in men! Cheers. Thanks for the stories.

You know there's no hockey where I'm from. . .but that means little to nothing when reading your stories. *laughs* talk about passion! And if that's what hockey's like I need to get "into" that. =P Anyways fantastic job really! I'm a big fan and truly enjoy your works! Can't wait for what's next!

you are one cruel woman, Mugsy. ;) Absolutely love this story though - as a single mom I know exactly how Anna feels ... well except for the whole dating a hockey player thing - too bad all the guys on my local team are all married or barely legal. ;)

Yes, you did! You left them in the middle of scorching hot sex! How could you?? Loving this story, one of your best so far, and not just because it's about HZ and the Wings either. I'm loving the characters in this one.

Yay, mugsy. :) Nice job! Love the tension. Now you need to give people some release! Um, I didn't mean that quite the way it sounded... ;)

I have no right to complain after 5 amazing pages but..... @#@!#!@#!!! You stopped there???? You must admit, that was slightly evil. Can't wait for the continuation!

you write suck engrossing stories that have such heart and humour that i wait for every entry and this is one of the best bravo to you bravo

that was such a great installment!

I can't be mad that you cut it too short for my liking*

Great writing, love the characters, it's about hockey... what could be better?? LOL

I like it, but I have to point out that a three year old definitely notices when a parent goes missing. Maybe they repress it later and don't remember it exactly, but they know.

This is such a great story. I'm really enjoying the whole concept of the slowly, building tension.

"Henrik clenched his jaw and the hand at her back pressed more firmly."

A) I'm sooo glad you chose to change his name from Henrik to Hayden.

B) I shouldn't be able to tell that from reading your story, though. Proofread one more time, next chapter?

11. A Feel For The Ice (HZ and Anna):

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-feel-for-the-ice-ch-03

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In a word, scintillating!

Fuck off Kevin.....they are too close to be neighborly....even chosing clothes for her to use