by texashiker2003
I prefer hard core kink, but your story was entertaining and erotic. You should write a sequel and describe being much more aggressive with her.
If you do too, I would like to make your story a real experience. I emailed you.
Not hardcore kink, but I really enjoyed it. I've stayed in that hotel and it is superb, but I was by myself (:. You write very well!
I loved your story, but hardcore fetish and bondage fans will likely think it is too vanilla. I am confident your story rating would be much higher if it was in the Erotic Couplings category. Keep writing!
I hope my New Year's Eve is as wonderfully delicious as that of your two lovers. Very good story!
Beautiful. Passionate. Loving. Your description of their sharing mild but powerfully erotic fetish play aroused me greatly. Let me be your Cindy next New Year's Eve.