by Professor_XXX
You have endless opportunity here please keep it going.
Great progression from 1st chapter. Hope you find some occasions to revisit the hypnotic trance & deepen the minor changes that are bringing her inner sex angel back to life.
good suspense, and good story line, a few more details would be nice, but I still love it.
But I really hope this doesn't blow up in his face somehow...
He really loves her and just SERIOUSLY wanted to improve their sex life... It would be too bad if he screwed it up and turned her into a complete slut, even for others...
Of course, it would be just as bad if she figured out what he's done and takes exception...
Crossing my fingers for them...