by NorCalGE
Stories like this make me wonder. Teasing about getting a little while he is out of town in one thing. Still that would eventually lead to an affair. But to actually do it? And let a guy who they threesomes with just move in for the week and still be there? Your world is far different from mine. gave it a 2
Not a fan of John being there when you got back, but you were good with it. You never planted your seed tho...
Cuck shit, you see so much of it these days on Lit one would think this type of fetish is mainstream behaviour.
Hate to burst the bubble to the loons who follow this drivel, it isn’t. Not even close. Reality finds the bulk of us laugh at the poor sad sick souls who want to see their wives fucked by others who laugh at them well.
Scores 1/5 in future please include cuckold in the tags so others can avoid this shit.
Awww how sweet another closeted male author. Its even more fun if you actually dont live vicariously through a woman and just take that cock yourself.
Otherwise you'll keep writing worthless empty cuck (wannabe cum dump) stories like this.
Just keep you mouth open, I need to take a piss and nothing better then an empty talent free bag. Cheers
Good first person view of the story. A little technical, and not very descriptive (as critics said of my writing, too.)
Forget about those clueless who use the terms cuck and slut, as they know not what the words mean. This was a good piece about a couple of swingers without the useable emotional baggage hang-ups.
Garbage. Some actually thought this was "nice". Really? What sewer did they crawl out of?
Not really into sharing and being with a naked guy. writing was good though.
The reason this storyline doesn’t often work in real life is down to trust. Your characters trust each other completely, so this frees them up to take sexual enjoyment with others, enhancing their own relationship. Pity humans are not basically trustworthy, as I would love to live in a society where they were and this could happen. Enjoyable and erotic - I’ll keep hoping for trust! Thanks.
Low morals and no real love or respect for one another.