All Comments on 'A Few Nights Away'

by NorCalGE

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OdiouserOdiouseralmost 3 years ago

Very, very nice. Perfect.

GamblnluckGamblnluckalmost 3 years ago

Stories like this make me wonder. Teasing about getting a little while he is out of town in one thing. Still that would eventually lead to an affair. But to actually do it? And let a guy who they threesomes with just move in for the week and still be there? Your world is far different from mine. gave it a 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Cuck and slut , nothing else to say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

the usefully load of rubbish.

patilliepatilliealmost 3 years ago

Not a fan of John being there when you got back, but you were good with it. You never planted your seed tho...

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Mfm , whorewife, that means one of the males is a cuck.

WargamerWargameralmost 3 years ago

Cuck shit, you see so much of it these days on Lit one would think this type of fetish is mainstream behaviour.

Hate to burst the bubble to the loons who follow this drivel, it isn’t. Not even close. Reality finds the bulk of us laugh at the poor sad sick souls who want to see their wives fucked by others who laugh at them well.

Scores 1/5 in future please include cuckold in the tags so others can avoid this shit.

iameaseliameaselalmost 3 years ago

Awww how sweet another closeted male author. Its even more fun if you actually dont live vicariously through a woman and just take that cock yourself.

Otherwise you'll keep writing worthless empty cuck (wannabe cum dump) stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Just keep you mouth open, I need to take a piss and nothing better then an empty talent free bag. Cheers

Lifestyle66Lifestyle66almost 3 years ago

Good first person view of the story. A little technical, and not very descriptive (as critics said of my writing, too.)

Forget about those clueless who use the terms cuck and slut, as they know not what the words mean. This was a good piece about a couple of swingers without the useable emotional baggage hang-ups.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Garbage. Some actually thought this was "nice". Really? What sewer did they crawl out of?

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 3 years ago

Not really into sharing and being with a naked guy. writing was good though.

chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The reason this storyline doesn’t often work in real life is down to trust. Your characters trust each other completely, so this frees them up to take sexual enjoyment with others, enhancing their own relationship. Pity humans are not basically trustworthy, as I would love to live in a society where they were and this could happen. Enjoyable and erotic - I’ll keep hoping for trust! Thanks.

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 3 years ago

No negative judgment here. Five stars. Nicely told.

NitpicNitpicalmost 3 years ago
What

What a load of crap.

BSreaderBSreaderalmost 3 years ago
Just another couple with

Low morals and no real love or respect for one another.

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