All Comments on 'A Figment of Imagination'

by Bob006041988

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foolscapfoolscapover 7 years ago
2nd person just doesn't work, at least not for me.

To whom were you speaking? Certainly not to this balding, demi-portly, old man. Concept was interesting and had potential which was not realized or realizable because it was impossible for this male reader to suspend disbelief.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Using for a women I can never have

^^Anybody that bothered reading beyond that is an idiot.

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