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LitCritabout 9 years agoAmatuerish
Very ham-handed and immature - no-one is THAT naïve and unaware any longer and no practiced seducer would be that clumsy - I'm sure a pregnant team member would unbalance his formations even more.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoRather amusing actually. I think some critics take it all a too seriously.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoIt's a fantasy guys...
..., one I wouldn't mind having myself. Thanks for the inspiration.
Anonymousabout 9 years agowut
A university student who doesn't know about sex? One who is also naive enough to believe this?
Anonymousabout 9 years agoHinting at pedophilia
If they claim 18 but she doesn't know about sex, the author is picturing her to be ten or twelve.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoContinue please!!!
Please write another chapter! I want to know what will happen next?
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