All Comments on 'A Flash Story'

One of your best, JB! I hope Peeping Tom contacts Michelle and marries her. He'd be a fool not to. Five stars! But please no chapter two or any follow-up story. Let the fairy tale end with "they lived happily ever after."

Hilarious! Hoisted on her own petard.

5

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Saw a pair of beautiful legs at the Indianapolis airport once and snapped a photo Truly lovely stems. Maybe I should have been less discreet and enjoyed more of a show. This story makes me wonder what might have been. Thanks you. 5*.

Finally, after years of searching, I have found an author on Lit who perfectly captures the woman’s perspective — in a unique voice! Clearly written by a girl’s girl, JBEdwards. You’ve outdone yourself with this one. What woman doesn’t love to be stalked, intruded upon (in violation of federal law — LOL!) and then mocked by a man? Contempt and scorn are the best aphrodisiacs!! I learned that from my girlfriend, oops I mean my friend, you know, when I wasn’t having phone sex with her—you know, like all women do with their best friends!

My favorite part is that Michelle and Tom are instantaneously married, because Tom has decided, that’s how it will be!! So romantic! So that’s really the dream for a rube like Michelle! All’s well that ends well! Thanks for writing. Can’t wait to read more!

I loved it. It was just right: the kind of story that takes you by the hand and leads you wherever the author wants to take you. No loss of credibility and in all oh-so-erotic.

Thanks.

I love short stories and this one so well written.

Such a lovely sexy story. Brilliant.