All Comments on 'A Fleeting Glimpse'

And 10 years further on?

Well I'm depressed now!

Such a beautifully executed story of love and loss.

Well done! So evocative.

As another "good friend" throughout my teen years, I related to his yearning. This is a very good story of longing and regret, without slipping into self pity or becoming maudlin. It's a wonderfully melancholy tale.

Nicely seen. Literally!

“would invite my single mother and I over on Sundays.”

I’m sure they would invite my single mother but I’m not sure they would invite I.

Most excellent!

Left me wanting more ... yet, it was complete.

Well dxone!

5 stars. I enjoyed especially "she forever lives in my memory" conclusion, because that is also the central theme of my own story in this competition. Some erotic memories fade and are displaced by new experience, while others are forever. Nice to find someone who shares the sentiment.

Real and honest. No unnecessary bravado just vulnerability.

Thank you. This was a wonderful bit of unrequited love registering here.

Lovely!

I would say Bravo for the story but I agree with djrip, I’m depressed now 😂

And the memory lives on!

5

Man up!