All Comments on 'A Flow of Souls'

That was unexpected from you. Very short and enjoyable, just like his poem. I liked it and thanks for the story. Jim

When a person passes that "70" mark they begin to reflect more on what life was (or, at least for me). Really a good story and a real commentary on life. Truly enjoy your writings.

The moral majority may react negatively but her actions appear to be relevant!

really really great.

A poem within a poem. I very much enjoyed your story Magmaman.

Nice-a great short story

I am only 66, but that brought back a memory of me riding a Greyground bus. I was laying across the back seat in full uniform (USMC)1962. I woke up covered by a young lady's sweater. A pretty young teenage girl had covered me I realized, because she smiled at me from another seat. I returned her sweater and I sat with her after that. We passionately kissed and hugged for an hour or two until I reached Oceanside, Ca.

I had never realized it but her Mother and Sister had been sitting across from us all that time and had never interfered in any way, allowing us our privacy. I remember the Mother and the younger Sister smiling at each other. I only found that the three were related after we got off. We kissed one last time and never saw each other again. We had lived a lifetime of romance in that brief interlude and I have never forgotten.

I am sure that she had a real life to continue in her world, and I had my life and duty ahead of me at 18. I never questioned her motives because as you wrote...our souls flowed together for moment in time. Thank you for putting it so romantically, Ron Wood

A beautiful sexy short story!

it's a veritable MM trademark to meld a touch of the sublime with the low down & gritty.

Simply wonderful.

Just plain a nice read thanks

Jolly good show.straightforwardly told.

Your story reminded me of some of mine. Fond memories, indeed. Thank you very much for writing.

Bf

Not only of your writing talent but that I didn't meet that beautiful lady on my way to Basic Training in 1968.

I am just one of those you spoke of, a cheating whore.

How 'bout that? Just a soul. I wonder if she told her husband about it?

Today I started to go through your stories. After reading a few of them I must say I like your style very much.

Now I will just keep on reading. Thank you so much!

Interesting story. I'm sure he will never forget her. Who would.

Well done. Thank you.

LWlurker

Great story written with a sensitivity that’s fantastic. For someone who got the “greetings” letter brings back memories of better times

*****I remember the sixties. Great period read. Thanks for sharing.

A very well written story describing one of many events that occur through life that does not impact the world or a life,but never forgotten in a lifetime.Realistic enough for 5 stars....proceeding to read all your tales....JZK

Lived through the 60’s. Got my letter. Never had a beautiful stranger give me a hand job.

Great story, well written. Sure brings back some memories, not that I had a lady do that to me, but the rest was about right.