All Comments on 'A Fly on the Wall'

Great story, Cute but Sexy. Hope to see more stories from you.

The thought of separating intuition and random thoughts and being aware of it is interesting. I think most people do it without realizing it. Good read!

I kept waiting for someone to kill the fly.

Love the way you think.

Great job.

Your way with words and concepts and the blending of the two is excellent.

I’m now going to read the rest of your stories thank you.