All Comments on 'A Forbidden Triangle'

Fantastic story!! I will read this story over and over again. This is one that you absolutely must continue. I would love to see how things continue to develop among the three characters.

I wait for your stories to appear and it has always been worth the wait. No matter what topic you pick you always fill them with such detail that I find myself lost in the characters and intimintly arroused. The passion and lust in your own soul leaps from the page and takes me with you. When I read your story I become your Amber, you my Morgan.

Thank you.

How can anything that great, that sensual, that loving be forbidden? Let's get t-shirts made and start a movement for Mother-Daughter love!

Great story! Thanks.

Brilliant, as always. This was beautifully written and wonderfully crafted.

I am an author on here but can only wish to write a story this good. Fantastic. I want more.

Awsome!

Great job! If I didn't read your bio, I would have thought you were one of the characters ( in the third person). Great job!

Please keep going, a great stroy line with a whole lot od potential!

I just wanted to let you know how incredible your writing and desciptive abilities are. I look forward to a sequal to this story, or any one of your others as well. I am waiting near breathlessly.

Chris L

And as I sat here reading it, playing with my own pussy after finishing the first page, my mind wandering back to my first time with Molly and her friend Anne, I couldn't help but finger myself more and more. When I finished reading your lovely story, I sat here, my eyes closed, thinking of your beautiful story, and came wonderfully as a result! Thank you dear and keep on writing such beautiful stories!

Abby

I can't begin to describe what this story - and all of Sarah's writing, um, all of Sarah - does to me. I love it, and I love you.

Steph

No need to add to what the others have said. This is surely your best so far. Wonderfully sensual and nicely detailed erotica.

Wonderful read Pixie. You must do a sequel! The last line is just begging for it..err, I mean has me begging for it.....um you know what I mean.

Hope to see more !!! Thanks!

--mglittr

Was it fiction, or was it based on a real event?

The detail, and description of the characters was very beleivable, as was the setting of the scene. For me, many good stories arouse me, not becasue of the description of the sex itself but the prelude, the development of the characters, and the situation(s) which finally result in the two individuals making love.

Well written, and i hope there is another sequel...

You have plenty to finsih :)

M.

Well you have been suggesting that I really do it with Sandy and Mom. Not sure if I can, but I am thinking about it.

Nice character development - and yes, that last line begs for a sequel

This one demands a sequel. Beautifully sensuous lovemaking and believeable characters. Nice work!

it was one of the most erotic sensual stories i've read in a long time, wonderful

This is a great Loving storie .

thanks for some nice and loving WET moments mmmmm

Wet kisses

Helena

What a wonderful tale of tender, sexual passion between three lovingly juicy women, simply glorying in being female and, what's even better, being female together and with each other!

So, so sexy and so, so wet-making - I came with each of them. Beautiful!

My mistress wanted me to read this to her after i broke some rules....we had alot of fun thanks to you, im glad that there is finly a good story that reminds me just a little bit of my mistress and I

What a great hot story!!! Just would have liked some mom/daughter sex. Why should Amber only get a chance at Kelly??

Marsha

I loved this story: the development of emotions from the initial reaction of Morgan and Amber as they think about Kelie and their surprising sexual attraction to Morgan's mom. Your description of Kellie's fantasy about Amber and her imagination re: Morgan and Amber making love was superb. Just enough detail to arouse our interest and our other "parts". I am a man and boy was I turned on. I wish that you would write a follow up to the Morgan, Amber, Kellie first intense love making session. I have some suggestions, but since anyone in the world can read this, I am going to send it to you in an e-mail. I can think of no good reason to share an idea with everyone, when it was your Forbidden Triangle story that sparked my ideas. Typical male, I know, but I would have loved to have watched this scene unfold, starting with Kellie changing clothes, partying with the "college crowd", the dances and finally back to Morgan's for a fulfillment of their lust and release of their mutual erotic love making... Great story... I will read more of your stories. Secret Admirer in Round Rock, TX

Shame, she had to make herself cum and just watch her Mom and Amber fuck...;>)

well pixie ... that was sooo hot I loved every second of it and it definitely got

my juices flowing and had me wishing I was there!!! stunning writing and definitely 5/5!!! looking forward to readin the rest of ur stories!! juci luci xx 

A beautifully written erotic narrative that has aroused this old man more than once!

For an incest story it was very lacking in incest. And that was the most akward threesome ive ever read. Completely leaving the mc out, craving attention.wasn't even a threesome, more like a voyeuristic swinging. Except the voyeur clearly wanted to be apart of it, but the other two were not interested in her at all. Like I said, I guess you did it on purpose for some reason but I have no clue WHY u did, that story left me completely unsatisfied 8( i can understand trying to play with your readers emotions, making a character feel left out, with the two women shes interested in clearly interested in eachother and not her, but I read a sex story for warm and fuzzy emotions and love between characters and hot sex to get me off. Not akward situations where I feel bad about a character cuz of her insensitive lovers. That shit dried me up so fast. If I could rate your story less than 1 star I would

Amazing, now my juices are running down my legs and I just wish someone was there to take care of it..

you could have got a second chapter out of that, what happened the following morning, this was good