All Comments on 'A Fortunate Encounter'

i found the story to be well written and had that quality of holding the reader's interest. i hope to find more by the same author!

Very, very sexy and I had a lot of fun reading it. I'd love to meet a girl like Abby and have her take my anal cherry. Very good job and I hope to see more from you in the future.

I hope that you continue the story of Simon and Abby.

Whooo. What a hot story. Thank you for writing this!

I agree with Whiskey, meeting a girl like Abby would be a beyond words. To bad the world doesn't have more girls like her in it. This was a great story. Abby would be a great character to share some of her escapades. Simon seemed a little disposable, but I could really see a good series here with Abby's life. Hope to see more of her!

More, please! Abby is a dream come true and I would love to see them getting it on in a regular mode.

Please write next part!

Great story really enjoyed thx :)

Love it :-)

fantastic story. really looking forward to your next one! thanks for writing!

The characters got right to fucking, but still felt like well-fleshed out characters; they had little moments of hesitation and self-awareness and affection for each other that elevated it beyond IKEA erotica.

It managed to make me like the characters involved, too--it felt like i was watching my friends *finally* get together after like a year of flirting.

Thanks!

Sacha Witt

I think we all need more Abby and Simon in our lives.

Best story of the year so far. I really hope you either continue with this story or write simular ones

what a great story. loved everything about it. Especially Abby!!! Please, please give us a second chapter!

Wish I had met her!

That was adorable!!!!

I loved the combination of her cuteness and dominance. More please!

I tink its about time for a sequel

SUPERB...maybe next time she has a friend just like her with her... WOW

Loved this. You automatically love her just like he did. Then when she turns out a Domme with this cute personality it was so good.

Gentle and sweet makes for the best domination. Just because you like taking cocks up your ass doesn't make you a total masochist. I want to be violated lovingly, not forced with pain. The calm sweet persona reinforces the humiliation and embarrassment without shredding self-esteem. For example, I love to be spanked, not because of the pain, but because it embarrasses me to feel my fat bubble butt jiggle like a girl's would. But at the same time, it feels so good and validating for a girl to appreciate that part of my body. When I was in high school, the prettiest girl in the whole school waited for me after our art class ended so no one could see her slap my butt as I was bending over. She gave the biggest naughty smile and said, "Sorry. Couldn't help myself." Then she turned around, swishing her hips as I stood there speechless.

Very fortunate encounter indeed! You manage to avoid most of the tropes of the genre while telling the story of a lonely guy more shy than is good for him. Please keep writing.

LOVED the story, well written and VERY hot!

Next time he sucks it.

The perfect match between a dom. and a submissive. I was jealous of Simon. What happens next?

I loved this story! I am so ready to be "Simon"! I have been searching for my Abby for a very long time!

I am not a critic or other author I am a normal reader and I like to tell my opinion hoping that not bothering you, I really like the story, but there is no romance , no emotions, and feelings just like watching porn movie in the middle, the passion motivation ,and tension between couples before and during sex makes the sex more erotic, it is your story and it well-written, I just not feel any emotions between them that is all. and I know it is like a man/whore relationship only fuck without real emotion, it is not my type of story but I like the sex despite what I said before, that is why I gave it 4 stars.

Nice to read about a ts top/m bottom that is based on respect and affection and not just suck rutt and kicked in the butt.

This was a five story in my opinion.

I hope to see you make another edition in this story as it was brilliant. I want to see Abby and Simon going on a sweet date with each other.

Same as the characters in the story, I want more!

A marvellous story, very well written and full of charme... I'd wished to meet a person like Abby in my life to experiment to be possessed by her, feel all her power inside me...

A wonderful story, well told. Thank you.

Love to read more of this story. Abby is so sexy and hot!

Excellent! Would love to hear how this couple continues, hopefully developing a healthy relationship,