All Comments on 'A Fresh Start: Coming Clean'

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M4blokeM4blokeabout 1 month ago

A great story BF. The characters are beginning to gain depth. I don't know if romance is what you are going for but if it is then you have nailed it. I wonder if it might be fun to make future chapters more 'edgy' though. Looking forward to finding out.

GreylagGreylagabout 1 month ago

Another great piece of writing weaving others into the story together with the sex is well thought out.

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Female in her early fifties with time on her hands. Interested in creative writing and role playing and, like most people, i'm here to have some erotic fun. Biker chick (British not American type) in the 80s/90s and still very much into the British Biker culture. I was a wild ...

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