All Comments on 'A Friend in Need'

Great story

DragonRider55

he needed to return the favor

I enjoyed the story a lot, but ... please either get a spell checker or proof-read it yourself, or have a friend read it.

One small problem, "She leaned forward and breathed in my sent." That should be "my scent."

First, go to a dictionary and read the definition of hymonym. Then have someone who understands them edit your writing in the future.

A nice story was spoiled by your errors that, unfortunately, would not necessarily be caught by a spell check program, i. e., sent/scent, grown/groan.

Anonymous user above. Thanks for your feedback. Also, some critiques on your critique. It’s spelled homonym.

I would have edited this story but this site doesn’t allow for easy editing so I said screw it.