All Comments on 'A Friend with Many Benefits'

First story!

4

Go with erotic couplings next time you write something like this. This is not a romance story. At least not yet!

Just a few sentences tell us what's really going on here. She's doing this as a lark. She doesn't think he's at her level, but she wants to try this. Probably she'll never see him again, but it was a good sex session and and as a diversion it was good. He'll thank the gods for the opportunity and will be disappointed for the lack of an encore. You take your pleasures where you can. 4*

Interesting premise.

But seriously rushed sex.

Needed some reluctance, even if only minimal.

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay. Teasing. Dialog while all this was going on.

Three stars.

Interesting debut - not sure about being a romance but certainly stimulating

More please

Ahhhh!! My desk-top is smoking, you could start a fire with that.

"I knew this was a bad idea." More than a one off booty call then? It can get a bit scarey when you realize you are already beginning to think about a next time. 5*s