All Comments on 'A Friendly Competition Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Bwahahahaha

This is hilarious and fun to read. Great job! And I hope you continue this so that we know who wins!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fun ride

I love a good competition. Please go on

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story

But if you are putting the first initial, no need for the font changes. Just annoying after a while

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful!

This was an absolutely fantastic read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great start!

Great start, to what promises to be a superb story!

CMK877181CMK877181over 5 years agoAuthor
Delay

Hey all. I just wanted to say that despite the long wait time, I do still plan on continuing this series with three more parts. I’ve been really busy with a bunch of stuff that has delayed me, but part two of this series should finally be coming out soon. Send me a message if you have any particular challenges in mind for our two beautiful daring protagonists!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Idea

Hi, I really liked this story, but waiting for part two is taking too long. There are so many ideas for challenges. I guess incest is a big "slut chalenge", like who would do it with closer relative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Proof reading

Great story great ideas but super huge pet hate is getting the names wrong. It happened twice in this story. Once when messaging each and you said Stacy and another where Lindsay wonders what Lindsay will think of her video ??? That’s super annoying and stands out to me like dogs balls . Happy to proof read future chapters if you want.

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