All Comments on 'A Friend's Love Ch. 03'

Great installment and glad your back looking forward to more.

Welcome back. Hopefully ryan and jess work things out but if not more ryan and erica would be great

Happy to see you back and continuing this story. O like the erotica but look forward to the romance between Raun and Jess if that is the way you go. Again welcome back.

DP

Great work! Please don't let us wait too long for the next chapter though...

I am loving this series. Can't wait to see what happens.

When do we get the next chapter?

I.W

Weak. You stumble for 3 chapters what you could say in 3 pages. All the messing around and a page and a half of fucking some hoe pornstar and old stitched up cum dumpster ex.

Please continue.

U alive?

Wow. Ryan really turned into a man whore. While he lets his friend “heal”, he’s screwing every woman in his path. That’s “love”?

Hope you are well and can find time to add to this story.

DP

Looking forward to more!

That was hot! Love the build up and tension between jess and ryan.

Fantastic series so far!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

same comments as the last chapter.....

"'I don't think I should,' Ryan shot Emily a smirk." See my comments about smirk in the other chapters.

"Ryan wanted to meet up with his old friend Daniel from High School" "They were Co-Captains on the swim team" "the perfect description of Ying and Yang" "became a Police Officer" The only words that should have been capitalized were the names Ryan and Daniel. None of those other words are proper nouns. Also, it's yin (no G) and yang, not Ying and Yang.

Please try to get a better editor/proofreader.

Once again, the sex scenes are too over the top, too long, and boring. Why is Ryan fucking any woman that invites him to their house? And if he's a partner at his company, why is he having sex with a subordinate?

I feel like chapters two and three are about a completely different person than in chapter one. There's nothing from chapter one Ryan that carried over three-and-a-half years to subsequent chapters. Ryan left LV a guy we're rooting for and came back an unsympathetic character. I don't see how Ryan and Jessica ever wind up together at this point. It's too unrealistic.

Oh! What about his watch he left under Jessica's bed before he went to college? It was a big plot point in the first chapter and then we don't hear about it again.

This was bad. Crap romance. After he slept with Emily I didn’t waste my time reading the rest. The writing feels like a male writer.

It’s raunchy, not erotic.