by Contrasting
Really like your work, here is to hoping you return to the Milf list series where you really excel.
I had a hard time getting into this chapter because I keep flashing back to the fact that Taylor was robbed of her right to initiate the new members last chapter.
Out of all of your stories (Milf, Investment,and Fuck Toy), that is the only part that I truly hated. One of the few sex scenes where I didn't get hard. Please don't do such a thing again.
I would love to see Ki get exposed as a Daddy Fucker (the only version of incest that turns me OFF). Also I would of course love to see there be some form of making it up to Taylor for the ruined initiations. Anne and Mr G were the ones she was most looking forward to.
Sorry for beating a dead horse but.....
You left this story before its natural conclusion. There are way too many loose threads, starting with Taylor getting it in the ass. There was the intercourse training, the oral training, and a butt plug. Feels incomplete.