All Comments on 'A Full Moon Phase Ch. 05'

Are these a different set of characters than before or did you change their names? Where's Beatrix, Kat, Michael,etc? WTH is going on?

Are you separating the two groups on purpose? It almost reads like two different storys. I think I'm just sorta lost w/this whole storyline. I will read the next chapter to see if I get a better feel for your story.

I'm totally on board with the cadence of this story. There are a lot of characters and pairings and a need to have them fleshed out even as the story progresses.

There's an entirely different feel to this story compared to the other nonhuman were tales on Lit. Feels like these characters are finding 'love in a hopeless place'. I like it.

Patiently waiting for more ;)

I was on board with this story until you had Gretchen and Nina become lovers and had Nina and Wolf have sex after, Wolf found his mate Gretchen. I just don't get the point of having characters find their mate if they're just going to have sex with others. And to me making Gretchen share Wolf with Nina is disgusting and a slap in the face. Nina should go find her own mate and leave Wolf and Gretchen alone.

Your story is WONDERFUL! I understand EXACTLY what you are doing--spinning the different subplots that will certainly merge as the story continues. This is true and complex literature, which is much more than most people expect on Literotica, unfortunately. It is decidedly NOT a simple tale full of sex. In addition to the mysteries of most were stories, you have woven the mysteries of political intrigue, rising to a "life or death" level. Don't be discouraged by those who can't keep up with your story. Those of us who CAN revel in it!