by formyqueenspleasure
Great build up, you set the scene perfectly, I can't wait to read more. X sissy Lucy
So much build-up in all facets, save for tense and grammer. Not looking for it but there was a sentence in which you altered the principal /noun from him to her.
Your proof reading will enhance our pleasures while we read your stories.
Based upon this offering, I am comfortable that you have many episodes to follow. I know I will not be alone waiting for them.
Absolutely 5*, I have only just got to read this story and I'm afraid I will get in trouble at work I can't put it down, it ticks all my boxes and it's got off to a brilliant start, moving on to chapter two right now, 💋💋💋