All Comments on 'A Full-Service Cottage Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great build up, you set the scene perfectly, I can't wait to read more. X sissy Lucy

MissLouisecdMissLouisecdover 2 years ago

oh god i hope there is more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So much build-up in all facets, save for tense and grammer. Not looking for it but there was a sentence in which you altered the principal /noun from him to her.

Your proof reading will enhance our pleasures while we read your stories.

Based upon this offering, I am comfortable that you have many episodes to follow. I know I will not be alone waiting for them.

petey377petey377over 2 years ago

more please can;t wait to hear how far sissy krissi will go

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice introduction to start the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't wait to see where this goes , good read so far

SuckergurlSuckergurlover 2 years ago

Absolutely 5*, I have only just got to read this story and I'm afraid I will get in trouble at work I can't put it down, it ticks all my boxes and it's got off to a brilliant start, moving on to chapter two right now, 💋💋💋

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I find that Kat is going to burn.

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