All Comments on 'A Fun Day Off'

Nice! 5 Stars.

So obviously written by a dude just a few lines in. Try again!

Unimaginative

Not bad... sexy but not *very* well written. Who are these people? I don't feel like I know them, they're cardboard cut outs who only exist for sex in this story, and that's kind of a turn off. Gimme more daddy ;)

ok i guess, needed more detail not looked yet but if part two brings in mom too and all four get to fuck.