All Comments on 'A Game Ch. 1'

Great start to an incredible story. You brought me with you and teased me with your excellent writing! Keep on writing, share your talent with us...

I enjoyed your vivid description of the state of mind your character was in. I prefer the first person writing style. I also write in first person, to me it seems more genuine. Thank you for an entertaining story and I look forward to reading more as time permits!