All Comments on 'A Game of Basketball Pt. 04'

Fun dynamic change from your...less consensual stuff. Great writing though - I like this (closer to) give and take, and it's a more rarely written iteration of trans-on-male

Really good, but what was the private conversation after practice? Did I just miss that part?

Ilove the story line and hope that you continue with Dave and Nicole. I've read a few of your stories and ithink that you're quickly becoming my favorite writer. Keep them coming.

Gotta admit im loving the change from the more uh forceful stuff, they are so sweet together also I know what website im on but i cant help but look foward to the more innocent and sweet moments they share together! your best story yet!

so when are you gonna tell us that finns mom is a tranny

Amazing series, I'm curious where you are going with Dave's reoccurring dreams. I also love the evolution of Dave and Nicole's relationship. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Amazing as usual. But I'm with the anon poster, wasn't there meant to be a serious conversation between Nicole and David after their class? It was after her conversation with Anna.

Good story but several typos in this chapter.

I’m curious what happened to that important conversation they were supposed to have as well??? And when are we going to find out she’s really his childhood friend??? ;-p

far and away the best new series on literotica. great story. eagerly looking forward to the next one

Who would that woman

You took that out of Blue Mountain State, didn’t you? I still approve!

Love this series and VERY well written!! Now im looking for my sweetheart with something extra too!!

please where are the rest of the stories like this one what I mean is young love and meaning young transgender girls and the teen boys who fall for them , So far I've found three delightful stories and this one has me wanting more .but being avid reader I must take my time with this one I think know what shes hiding from him .

Not sure why you've added the weird sci-fi element. It was jarring when they were talking about new phones, but this superhero insert actively takes away from the story.

Dear Phoenix, I have read countless stories on Literotica but commented only MAYBE twice before. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. I like that the tg female is topping the dude. Sometimes your sentences are confusing. I believe you could use an editor. I volunteer ;-). Overall this has been a VERY entertaining story and I will be sorry when it ends as with all good stories. You spin a good yarn and paint a fine picture with your words. Keep up the good work. Best wishes & God bless you.

I love the story