All Comments on 'A Game of Basketball Pt. 08'

Mate, I came here to have a walk, not cry.

I didn't plan on crying tonight.

First of all fuck you! I came here to get horny not cry. Second, you writing has improved immensely since the start of the series. It is very rare to feel so emotional about an erotic story. This was one of the best chapters, although, as far as erotic themes are concerned I love the dominant top trans. I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Continue to another chapter

Really poignant. Are you gonna write more? Would work either way, I'd love to read more of both the erótica and the story, but your footnote implies this is the end and I guess we can use our imagination!

This is one of the best series. I never thought one could touch Tuck or Cockatoo but this is very well on the way. I love it and keep it going at least for a little while.

Legit made me cry amazing

You are an awesome writer keep up the good work and please let it continue for a while

too bad you are ending the story would like to know what was up finns ass and some of the others

That was totally a mistake, it's no where near the end of the story ;)

This was a good series. Hopefully you will continue.

I love the story and your writing.... keep going 😊

another fantastic addition to the series. thanks for sharing

When will the next chapter be posted??

This has been a good story from beginning to end. I can not say that it is all that believable but none the less a good story.

I am addicted to this story. Please make it last forever.

If they don’t get married ima be so pissed lol

When is the sequelllll!

Another chapter to actually learn about Zach, who he was and alike before he dies would have been stellar, so people actually give a shit when he dies :/

It was tagedic that dearh has to be Dave and Nicole back together. Maybe Abby AND Emely again has marrigae wuy Dave AND Nicole. More people

Hope you continue the story. There are so many things left open. What is going to happen with Dave's dreams? i got to know.

one of the best yet, need a continuation, so many people involved

This has got to be one of the best series I have read. Although it seems like a good place to end, there is so many things left open. Nicole has yet to be told about her old teammates being sorry, which I find would be best to happen at the state final. The dreams still have not made the best sense. The team needs to come together before dave is allowed to play again, amd I feel he meeds to be a big part as to why the team comes together and accepts nicole. Please continue the series. Need more for a full conclusion to it.

This is one of the best series I have ever read, please just keep going, there is so much we have to see. The result of the dreams,, does he have superpowers? Are we going to have a foursome with Jess and Anna?

Please continue

I genuinely can't remember the last time I read anything with character work quite as engaging as this story, every turn, every fall, every ache and pain that Dave feels, I feel it with him. That's a mark of a truly great author.

I think this is the only time a porn story has made me cry. 10/10, really killed my boner tho

Yup, sobbing manly tears while desperately trying to regain my boner. I both love and hate you for this.

When I was reading the chart, I always thought that the funeral was related to Nicole or someone else. I haven't even reached the middle of this chapter but I wanna speak now. I know the author has his own idea of how the story should go but...WHY THE HELL IT TURN OUT LIKE THIS??!! There were no other way to resolve the familiar issues? That's so fucked up, I don't even know how to express it. I'll comment again after I finish the chapter, but this isn't getting more than 3 stars, it really bothered me how things turned out

Ah, also, Phoenix says that this is his sci-fi universe, so I dont know if the plane crashes are related to this matter. If it so, maybe my previous outburst was out of place

I don't know how is related this with Phoenix's other stories, but I still dont like the turnout of this chapter, and I hope to know if the answer I want is there somewhere

Still crying. What a truly amazing wonderful beautiful story!!! jill