All Comments on 'A Game of Basketball Pt. 09'

Best series on Literotica! Loving every chapter!

Your stories are both hot and amazing, keep writing.

I really look ke the duality of their relationship, i hope we continue to see both of our main characters be vulnerable and strong as they support each other

I love Dave and Nicole's relationship and could happily read about them with no drama at all. Plus the sex is really hot, but the relationship is a thing of beauty

I have to say ive really been enjoying your return to literotica, but this series by far my favorite of yours. This chapter was no exception. great characters, great writing. I enjoyed it from start to finish. so happy to see you returning to this story. thank you for sharing!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter! I’m looking forward to reading more!

We need you to Finish the story .

We want more of your story!!!! I love it!

First I've got to admit that I'm at part 6 right now so I don't know what happens after that, but I'd love to see Donny get a trans girlfriend, too. I'd also think a threesome involving Emily and Dave's mom would be amazing to read, but it would probably be weird for the overral story

awesome series,really need more. Im also really curious where you are going with the dreams and stuff

You need to finish this story I really enjoyed reading all of them and don't want it to end

Really enjoyed the story all the way through. Please do at least one more chapter to explain the demon dreams.

This might sound stupid but this series of stories has helped me come to expect my bisexuality had i hope you will continue to write about these characters thank you again

This is a top notch tale that just stops! I hope you will continue it before too long!!!

I really do gope you will continue with this. And for some strange reason I have a feeling that Fin also would very much like sone dick up his ass.. I dont know, mayve Im wrong. Heh

I read 9 chapters of a very good story and it just stops!!!!!!! You need to finish this so much left to tell. Won't read any more of you stuff until you finish this story. Who does this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's finished, just as an ebook.

You say it's finished as an ebook, does that mean this is the final chapter or that there is an ebook version out there with more? If so where?

For details on the ebook, go to my profile.

starting a series as a Literotica submission and finishing it as a pay-to-read elsewhere has always struck me as being bait-and-switch, unless it's made clear at the beginning that such will be the case.

Thanks phoenixcinders for an awesome series. I hope you will keep going with it and if so I can't want to read more. I am a writer of naughty stories myself, but have never posted them anywhere for people to read.

Its getting a bit drawn out now. Not their love story but the ominous background story. Every time something importation happens they just conveniently stop talking about it.

I hope write more of this as I’d love to know what the dreams mean and to see Finn cut down to size

Is this story series finished with the 9 parts here? Or are there additional chapters in the e-book on patreon?

That was great I hope it's not finished.

Please come back to this please

Please continue this as I really love the story

Dumb superhero comes out of nowhere getting in the way of a good love story

I know you made it clear not to continue this amazing story but I hope and request you to continue this one.

You can spice things up by getting mom and son railed by their respective partners at same time. And mom can give advice to son how to get fucked in more spicy ways.

I hope you will reconsider your decision not to continue this one.

Thank you ☺️

A wonderful story of the development of awesome love. Please, please, please don't let it end here

Excellent! Wish it was longer, only because it's a captivating story that's well done. Please continue with more chapters. Thank you!

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👅👅👅👅👅👅😁😁.. yes I loved it was hard to close it to get other things done or go on social media.

Was so real an intense... So ya I agree with everyone else that's read this story hope u continue this story❤️❤️❤️❤️