by DungeonMaster_69
Goes from 0-60 in 0.0001 seconds. No erotica here, just teenage boy fantasy for a very, very quick wank, apparently. No actual story at all.
Strange. About an hour ago someone said no story. If that is the case, what did I read?
I read a great little introduction for a series of Sister-Brother sexual romps. Growing from a challenge to a full blown errotic affair.
Going from basic copulation to mind blowing sexual experiences. A series that many of us will follow.
A couple of small errors, but nothing major.
Good intro of characters.
And each were the bigger winners.
I would like to take advantage.
no finesse, not much details, leaves a lot to the reader
the built-up is quick and totally unreasonable, a work of fiction
I was feeling horny when I started reading and shot just as they did. A good quick jack off story.
Now...Part 2?