All Comments on 'A Game Of Chicken'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Goes from 0-60 in 0.0001 seconds. No erotica here, just teenage boy fantasy for a very, very quick wank, apparently. No actual story at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Strange. About an hour ago someone said no story. If that is the case, what did I read?

I read a great little introduction for a series of Sister-Brother sexual romps. Growing from a challenge to a full blown errotic affair.

Going from basic copulation to mind blowing sexual experiences. A series that many of us will follow.

A couple of small errors, but nothing major.

Good intro of characters.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Both were losers,

And each were the bigger winners.

I would like to take advantage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot and sexy

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Good story

Can't wait for the follow chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Immature and totally lacking credibility.

sargedog1sargedog1over 2 years ago

Rediculous, I want my 4min of life back. Pure SHIT.

steeleye11steeleye11over 2 years ago

no finesse, not much details, leaves a lot to the reader

the built-up is quick and totally unreasonable, a work of fiction

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

much too short

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

Great story. Can't wait for the follow up. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wish I was him fucking her tight pussy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I was feeling horny when I started reading and shot just as they did. A good quick jack off story.

Now...Part 2?

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